Compliment:Good words in your poem very descriptive! Criticism:There wasn't really any videos and I think that would have been a great shot Compliment: The freeze frames of the waterfalls were pretty awesome
I really like your usage of the Ken Burns effect. You might have wanted some video footage though. I also really loved the sound effects of the water and streams it really helped tie your poem together.
I really like how clear your voiceover was. I think one thing that could be better is for you to read a little bit slower. I also like the sound in your back round.
I love the use of the Ken Burnz effect you used in all your photos! I would hsve loved to see some video... Great use of the water sound effects throughout the video.
I really love the shots of the waterfalls. Could have lowered the waterfall background noise so it would level out with your voice. Great poem love the idea of waterfalls
Compliment: Having the water dropping in the background sounded pretty cool and really went along with the subject of waterfalls. Critique: I think if you added more video it would have been perfect! Compliment: I liked the ripples as transitions, it was really cool and fit in nicely.
Compliment: I love your visuals. They were clear and eye-catching. Criticism: I think that when you recited your poem, you could have been a bit more clear. Compliment: I really liked the sound effects that you put. They weren't too loud or too quiet.
Nice B-Roll.
ReplyDeleteYou could've used video not pictures.
Really good audio!
Good lyrics
ReplyDeleteneeds better lighting in some pictures
Good visuals
Compliment:Beautiful sound effects
ReplyDeleteCriticism: More Video
Compliment: Good lyrics
great pictures
ReplyDeletelike the background noise
great voice over
I liked the use of the Kens Burns effect.
ReplyDeleteNo video? Overuse of ken burns?
I liked the complicated words such as "understatement"
Compliment:Good words in your poem very descriptive!
ReplyDeleteCriticism:There wasn't really any videos and I think that would have been a great shot
Compliment: The freeze frames of the waterfalls were pretty awesome
I really like your usage of the Ken Burns effect.
ReplyDeleteYou might have wanted some video footage though.
I also really loved the sound effects of the water and streams it really helped tie your poem together.
I like how you have waterfall sounds in the poem makes it good.
ReplyDeleteCould have used more video clips.
I like the ken Burns effect
I like the quality of the picture at the beginning
ReplyDeleteYou used a repetitive shot
Your voice over was clear
Nice poem and audio is clear, very easy to hear
ReplyDeleteNeed more videos
Good job over all!!
good lighting with all the shots
ReplyDeletemaybe lower the background
great audio
I really like how clear your voiceover was.
ReplyDeleteI think one thing that could be better is for you to read a little bit slower.
I also like the sound in your back round.
I like your pictures, more text layovers, Good transistions
ReplyDeleteI love the b-roll shots you got.
ReplyDeleteYou could have gotten more b-roll.
I like the words you used.
I love the use of the Ken Burnz effect you used in all your photos! I would hsve loved to see some video... Great use of the water sound effects throughout the video.
ReplyDeleteI liked At the end when you said "These are earths waterfalls"
ReplyDeletetheres no videos
Nice use of Ken burns
I really love the shots of the waterfalls. Could have lowered the waterfall background noise so it would level out with your voice. Great poem love the idea of waterfalls
ReplyDeletegood voice over
ReplyDeletecould of been a little louder
nice pictures
Visuals were amazing
ReplyDeleteI would like to see some videos instead of pictures
Nice use of ken burns, text layovers, and sound effects
Compliment: Having the water dropping in the background sounded pretty cool and really went along with the subject of waterfalls.
ReplyDeleteCritique: I think if you added more video it would have been perfect!
Compliment: I liked the ripples as transitions, it was really cool and fit in nicely.
Good sound Effects and audio
ReplyDeleteNeed more footage
Good visuals
Nice pictures very creative
ReplyDeleteCould have more video b-roll
Your poem is very relaxing with the raindrops :)
Cool background noise
ReplyDeletethe poem stopped a little too fast at the end
Cool shots
Compliment: I love your visuals. They were clear and eye-catching.
ReplyDeleteCriticism: I think that when you recited your poem, you could have been a bit more clear.
Compliment: I really liked the sound effects that you put. They weren't too loud or too quiet.
Gorgeous B-Roll !!
ReplyDeleteI think you could've gotten some video B-Roll.
Great audio, your sound effects and audio were balanced well.
Really creative poem
ReplyDeleteReally good words used in the poem
I really like the first picture in your poem!
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